I tried pushing the walls,
Bruised my knuckles on locked doors,
Broke my back trying to move mountains.
And When I was completely broken,
And when I gave up all control
All illusions of control,
When I was free falling,
The wind lifted me up
Like a feather, I was swaying in the air,
flowing and swirling with the wind,
flying with the wind.
Going where the wind took me,
Humming my favorite tune.
letting the chips fall where they may,
There was no plan from which they would stray.
By giving up the little power
I was trying so hard to clutch on to,
I was finally empowered,
I was finally free.
There was beauty all around me,
There were Joy, peace, and love,
And It was all for me,
When I was finally free,
Free from myself.
-N
Photographer unknown
Poetry Copyright 2017, Opinionated Head
June 8, 2017 at 6:02 am
Superb and I was finally free. Awesome and an picture of free falling. Great poem.
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June 8, 2017 at 6:08 am
I am so glad you enjoyed it.
I imagined the picture to be of a floating free soul, but free falling is a good take too. Thank you! 🙂
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June 8, 2017 at 6:10 am
Yes absolutely loved it as if you are just falling and not bothered one bit. Awesome.
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June 8, 2017 at 6:25 am
Thank you, so much!
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June 8, 2017 at 6:28 am
Welcome.
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June 8, 2017 at 6:25 am
Really liked this poem. Beautifully crafted. I’m looking forward to your future posts. Check out my blog if you get a chance!
Have a good day! Mena from noirerewritten.com 🌷🌷🌷
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June 8, 2017 at 6:32 am
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for stopping by, I will do that right away.
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June 8, 2017 at 8:12 am
Beautiful poem, A vivid description of the illusion of control.
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June 8, 2017 at 9:04 am
Thank you, for your kind words.
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June 8, 2017 at 9:18 am
No problem at all!
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June 8, 2017 at 8:56 am
Great poetry with an apt image…
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June 8, 2017 at 9:05 am
Thank you, I always spend a lot of time in looking for a perfect image, your feedback means a lot.
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June 8, 2017 at 12:13 pm
Hi N, the words are free from the clutches or judgment of society. It’s sensual and spirited where no limit is drawn. Coming from Linkedin! Cheerz
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June 8, 2017 at 1:01 pm
Very well put. Thank you for visiting and sharing you feedback. Cheers!
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June 8, 2017 at 1:03 pm
I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing 😉
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June 8, 2017 at 1:04 pm
I am really glad you did.
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June 8, 2017 at 1:05 pm
I’ll be looking forward for more 😊
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June 8, 2017 at 1:08 pm
Thank you, that means a lot!
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June 8, 2017 at 1:08 pm
Any time ❤️
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June 8, 2017 at 2:15 pm
Nice…it gives a vivid imagery and a liberating feel
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June 8, 2017 at 5:19 pm
Thank you!! 🙂
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June 9, 2017 at 5:34 pm
Powerful poem! I like the simplicity of words that you have use. Thanks for sharing. 🙂
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June 11, 2017 at 4:23 pm
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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June 12, 2017 at 6:20 am
Your poem paints a vivid and beautiful picture 🙂
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June 12, 2017 at 6:27 am
Thank you! Your feedback means a lot.
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June 15, 2017 at 6:13 am
Nicely expressed
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June 15, 2017 at 2:49 pm
Thank you!
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June 15, 2017 at 3:04 pm
Wc😇
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June 18, 2017 at 10:52 am
Beautiful poem ✨
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June 20, 2017 at 9:29 am
That’s a lovely prom, and I don’t normally read poems! Feel relaxed and free just reading it. Thanks
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June 29, 2017 at 6:47 pm
Thank you, that’s such a nice feedback. 🙂
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July 2, 2017 at 5:07 pm
A most powerful poem! It really does reveal, in such a beautifully poetic manner, that old saw; “We are our own worst enemies”. Without question, the only real barriers we humans face are those we construct ourselves. To truly let go and ride the wind is one of the most freeing yet empowering actions we can take!
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