The end came and took from me,
The only thing I cared about.
I live on carrying around,
A heart heavy with memories.
I am still alive,
But only a little.
Sun still comes up every morning,
But the night doesn’t end.
-N
Photographer unknown
Poetry © Copyright 2017, Opinionated Head
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August 12, 2017 at 4:46 pm
oh my god I love this ❤ Makes me want to read it again and again.
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August 13, 2017 at 9:59 am
oh! that means a lot.
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August 13, 2017 at 10:06 am
The intensity brings the shade of the night and emotional depth so vivid. I’ve been through such countless nights and can try to understand how it never seems to end. Love how you bring depth to your words, N. You should make a series and your words always haunt me endlessly.
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August 13, 2017 at 11:02 am
Thanks vishal, your encouragemnt means a lot. I have been thinking about writing a series, I shall start working on it soon.
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August 13, 2017 at 11:25 am
You should and I am looking forward N. Btw can I ask your name?
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August 13, 2017 at 5:13 pm
Sure, It’s Niharika
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August 13, 2017 at 5:15 pm
Thanks Niharika. It’s such a beautiful name. I think once in my short stories, I gave a character this name. I find it unique, pretty and glamorous 🙂
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August 13, 2017 at 5:52 pm
Thanks, That’s really kind of you. 🙂
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August 13, 2017 at 12:00 pm
Nice blog👌👌
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August 13, 2017 at 5:13 pm
Thank you!
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August 13, 2017 at 12:04 pm
This is so sad. It hurt my heart. Great work.
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August 13, 2017 at 5:13 pm
Thanks Quinn!
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August 13, 2017 at 6:39 pm
very nice. 🙂
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August 13, 2017 at 10:22 pm
🙂
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August 17, 2017 at 10:49 am
“But the night doesn’t end”
What a perfectly written line!
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August 17, 2017 at 11:35 am
Thank you!
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August 19, 2017 at 9:34 pm
love it. thanks for sharing.
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August 20, 2017 at 9:05 am
Thanks for sharing your feed back. 🙂
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August 30, 2017 at 5:47 am
It’s not easy to express such emotion but you have done great justice, the use of words to create impact is amazing.
Cheers, Charu
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August 30, 2017 at 8:21 am
Thank you Charu, I really appreciate you stoping by and sharing such kind words.
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