I might have stopped needing you
Your attention, your time, to love you
Honestly, that’s a liberating feeling,
But it’s not because I love you less
It’s because I am teaching my heart
To need less and love more,
It’s because I love you much more freely
Than I did before, then I could before.
You could say I am a poetess
I could write a poem that’s sweet
That doesn’t mean I truly miss you
But let me ask you this
Who do you think I think of
When I write a poem on love
You know it’s you, only you
All of them are about you
How could I not miss you then?
-N
Photographer unknown
Poetry © Copyright 2017, Opinionated Head
September 22, 2017 at 9:18 pm
It’s because I am teaching my heart
To need less and love more,
It’s because I love you much more freely
Than I did before, than I could before.
I loved these lines!! And also the entire poem. I enjoyed how you bring 2 contrasts together …I think that’s how love works really.
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September 22, 2017 at 9:45 pm
So much we learn about love long after we think we have learnt it all.
Thank you, I like bringing two contrasts together! 🙂
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September 22, 2017 at 9:47 pm
Yes, very true. You are very welcome 🙂
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September 22, 2017 at 9:48 pm
🙂
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September 22, 2017 at 10:37 pm
This is beautiful. You’re a warrior poet. It’s deep too. With an excellent message. Hope you’re doing well! And I hope, if this is ins[ired by your special someone, that they feel it deep within themselves.
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September 23, 2017 at 9:34 am
Hey Gustavo,
Thank you! I am so glad you like it this much. 🙂
I am good, hope so are you.
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September 23, 2017 at 6:43 am
hmmm.. started with something…and then turned completely upside down at the end.. 😀
Well, that’s what true love does honey!
Cheers!
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September 23, 2017 at 9:35 am
Hahaha…that’s how we get to the depth of things 😉
Cheers!
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September 23, 2017 at 9:55 am
Exactly! 😋 😜 😛
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September 23, 2017 at 9:15 am
Lovely words, I think your destiny is shaped for better things. The world awaits your kind personality 🙏🏻
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September 23, 2017 at 9:36 am
Oh, that’s such an encouraging thing to say, Thank you so.. muach! That means a lot. 🙂
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September 25, 2017 at 7:46 am
Wow..of course, I loved this. What do you think I think of when reading this poem????😊I was full of smiles reading this. That question at the end was so cute😊
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September 25, 2017 at 1:05 pm
I only know what I was thinking when I was writing. 🙂
Tell me what you were thinking when you read it?
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September 25, 2017 at 1:21 pm
Ha ha…I read it thrice. First time I was in a hurry. When I read for the second time, I loved it and wanted to read one more time. So that’s it👍
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September 25, 2017 at 1:53 pm
I was thinking … why do people try when they know it too late..
Why especially then?
Why not before..
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September 27, 2017 at 10:27 am
This has a very strong message. I loved all the lines. Read it twice. I really think that this is one of the great ones 🙂
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September 27, 2017 at 11:48 am
Oh that means so much Vivian, thank you!
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September 27, 2017 at 4:26 pm
I can sit and read poems on your blog all day long. :’)
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September 27, 2017 at 6:36 pm
Oh ket! You are too sweet!
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September 28, 2017 at 2:43 pm
:’)
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September 28, 2017 at 10:48 am
Beautiful and evokes feelings many of us know well. One error – *truly* 🙂
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September 28, 2017 at 12:20 pm
Thank you and Thank you!! the feedback and the correction, they both mean a lot! 🙂
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September 28, 2017 at 12:22 pm
Most welcome 🙂
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