He looked up at the sky and prayed
To whatever they pray to
Hoping there is something to believe in,
Hoping there is someone listening
Because he can’t be on his own anymore,
He couldn’t do it alone anymore.
He needed to share the burdens of his soul,
With someone who can handle it.
“Whoever you are, whatever you are
Do you think you can handle it?” He asked.
“They say there is reason
In whatever happens.
What reason is there in those
Who are born in dust and die
To become dust again? “
“Maybe I am too small
To understand all that,
I won’t ask you to change your plans,
I won’t ask for a home or food
If what you have chosen for me
Is starvation.
All I ask is that you share my hunger,
Share the cold and the loneliness,
Share the pain of my untreated wounds,
And share the helplessness
Of not being able to save my loved ones.“
“You didn’t give me much to offer you
And I am too small to matter
Yet I offer you myself
But I come with my burdens.
Do you believe you can handle it?”
“Is someone there?”
-N
Daily Prompt – Believe
Photographer Unknown
Poetry © Copyright 2017, Niharika Jaiswal
October 9, 2017 at 6:22 pm
Do you believe you can candle it. Nice poem. Appreciated.
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October 9, 2017 at 6:25 pm
Thank you, I really appreciate your kind word.
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October 9, 2017 at 7:54 pm
Beautiful piece of art❤ pic you attached to it really gives shiver. Great poetry 👏
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October 9, 2017 at 9:23 pm
Thank you Yusuf. Thinking about it gives me a shiver too.
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October 9, 2017 at 11:29 pm
Really enjoyed this one! Great piece.
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October 10, 2017 at 7:21 am
Thanks Paul. 🙂
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October 10, 2017 at 1:41 am
This is thought provoking. Questions. Serious questions. Answers are there but need to be searched for. Very nice piece of writing. Well done and thank you.
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October 10, 2017 at 7:23 am
Thank you so much Anne!
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October 10, 2017 at 5:54 am
Very deep, with lots of thinking about the truth, the pain, the burden. Love it. Great post☺️
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October 10, 2017 at 7:24 am
Thank you, Really appreciate your kind words. 🙂
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October 10, 2017 at 1:09 pm
This is very moving. I believe in God, but don’t understand many things. In this poem, the man doesn’t even know if there’s a God, yet he gives himself to…to what? The Universe? The invisible higher power? And the man has nothing but hardship. Yet he humbled himself before a God he doesn’t know exists. I know I’m not explaining myself well at all! But this poem got to me. I would like to think that if the story were real, the man would go to Heaven and receive indescribable love for all eternity, for his one simple act of faith in the unknown. 🙂
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October 10, 2017 at 2:19 pm
That would be a good end to his story 🙂
The man doesn’t exactly understand what is he praying to, but he is praying to whatever they pray to. In the slums no god, universe or higher power has showed him much kindness but now he can’t bear his burdens alone, he want’s to believe that there is someone who cares.
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October 11, 2017 at 2:23 pm
Insightful and so beautifully framed.
Good work Niharika! 🙂
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October 12, 2017 at 11:07 am
Thank you so much Himanshu! 🙂
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October 29, 2017 at 5:16 am
I will have a look right away.
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November 4, 2017 at 6:17 pm
Lovely ..!!
KEEP THE GOOD WORK ON..!!
-AJ
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November 4, 2017 at 7:09 pm
Thanks AJ!! 🙂
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